Finding Valathian: The Autumn Wind King

The Autumn Wind King
Pondered the plight…
He mused upon the hardened warrior
The chivalrous knight…

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Copyright The Muse 2008

Comments (23) »

  • papercages says:

    Wow! I love this. It is so beautiful.

  • White Iris Designs says:

    My oh my…finally you write of what I know you feel deep within your soul…deep true love!

    YOU…. whether willingly admit it or not are a deep romantic at heart. (as am I)
    I know how deep your love goes for YOUR Autumn Wind King!!

    I love this piece….and that you revealed another layer of who you truly are. This is exactly why I lovingly refer to you always as a Renaissance Woman. So very complex!!

    I love a great romantic love story..with a happy ending!
    So beautiful! xo

  • Lady Lynn's Boutique says:

    Muse,
    Your prose is like a great book that you do not want to end. Wonderful work! You paint beautiful pictures in my mind keeping me longing for more!

  • Juliarso says:

    Muse,

    Just want to say: Beautiful! How romantic it is…. I love it.

  • The Muse says:

    Papercages: why thank you ever so much! I love the humor of your blog…………Tam: lol, oh yes indeed, my autumn king is a keeper! And perhaps, just perhaps there is a bit of a romantic in this battle Muse lol xo, and when I need floral inspiration, I know that your blog will be my scent filled beacon!………..Ms Lynn: the story without end, longing for more, that is wonderful to hear! True love is like that, is it not?……….Juliarso: the kindness of your thoughts is so appreciated, beauty~romance~and love, all things to be thankful for :)

  • Linda says:

    Wow! Very romantic! Lovely!

  • Miriam says:

    Wow, how absolutely beautiful! I thoroughly enjoyed every single word. Truly, Muse, this is so beautiful, touching, and romantic!

    Miriam

  • The Muse says:

    Greetings Linda and Miriam…I thank you for taking time to read… :)
    I hope that the joy you found here will carry throughout your day, and bring love to your hearts!

  • LisaLisa says:

    I love it…soooo romantic and truly wonderful Muse!! I must say I have cut and paste quite a few of your prose now I will add this one.It’s like a good book at night when everyone is sleeping and you’re up reading a romantic story.
    Wow!!!

  • sunandheir says:

    Ethereal. That’s the word that came to mind when I read this. Your imagery is stark and beautiful. Thanks for sending me the link.

  • Liz says:

    Another beautiful piece that you composed to give us all a wonderful love story

  • Tabby @ ♥I Choose Bliss♥ says:

    Oh how deeply beautiful this piece is! I truly loved reading this Muse. Being able to look into your heart was a gift I will treasure.

    Warm Hugs♥

  • Judi "Jlo" Moran says:

    WOW…that’s all I can say…WOW!!!
    Moved me to my own saline sadness.
    And captured so beautifully my own longing for My Love, not so much to return to me, but to fully return to himself and the amazing man he was destined to be.
    WOW!
    Jlo

  • KellyKim says:

    Dear Wonderful Muse,
    Oh my goodness! This is a very great romantic poem for express the true love to our beloved!!

    If could sing like a love song would be super GREAT!!

    Many huggles,
    Kelly

  • Tracie says:

    Truly lovely! You transport me to other worlds…thank you.

  • petit says:

    Oh Muse how romantic, just the thing to read on my anniversary, thank you!!!

    Chriss

  • petit says:

    There is a suprise for you, visit my blog and you shall see – you are one of the ten that I consider the finest to be!

    Chriss

  • Heather says:

    Oh my gosh! This is lovely. My favorite time is Autumn and one of my favorite things is the wind in my hair. Next time the wind blows in my hair I will think of it as the Autumn Wind King.

  • The Muse says:

    sunandheir: Ethereal? Really? ooo love that word! Super glad to have you visit…and hope that you will return soon :)

    liz: I know you love a good love story :) so happy you liked this one!

    tabby; Yes, I think it is my heart…Funny…I wasn’t thinking that when I was writing…but yes, it is my love, my heart, my King. Wonderful to just spill the emotions in prose isn’t it? I am on my way to visit your blog :)

    jlo: xo Hi there! Oh yes, I believe we all have those moments of saline sadness… Wonderful to know that we need not drown in that pool…! I am glad that you have the attributes and blessings to swim!

    kelly: :) :) Song? That is what my son said..:) Oh goodness, it would be a top hit on the radio charts to be sure…I can hear it now! xox Glad you found it lovely!

    petit: Ah….anniversary? Really??? Well now, there you go! I hope your heart was filled and rekindled! :) Congrats to you and your Autumn Wind King! :)

    heather: ooooo, How romantic! That pleases me…and makes me feel grand! :) Just simply GRAND!!

  • Braja says:

    You are very prolific, Muse….

  • KellyKim says:

    Oh yeah! Top hit on the radio station! My muse! Thanks for the sweet comment on the etsy cottage style blogspot :D

    love,
    Kelly

  • Tabby @ ♥I Choose Bliss♥ says:

    I am grateful for you to my Muse!

    Warm hugs*

  • No Easy Beads says:

    Your writing is beautiful. Thank you for a wonderful visit.

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