Torn asunder from her slumber
In the hour of half past three…
The child knew the tyrannical regime
And followed instinctively.(removed for pending publication)
In the hour of half past three…
The child knew the tyrannical regime
And followed instinctively.(removed for pending publication)
Copyright 2008
The Muse
This Was My Submission As The Guest Writer At Zany Life & Crazy Faith
Comments (34) »
I’m looking forward to reading your latest work!
Miriam
You know I will be there! xo
Yes!!! Can’t wait to see more looking forward to reading more of your wonderful work!
I look forward to reading it.
I thought was out already? Muse…
Hopefully will see your new writing soon! Thanks for letting me know
Yours sincerely,
Kelly
Can’t wait to read your latest work Muse!
Oh my goodness, I have tears flowing down my cheeks! Beautiful and so heart warming. Thank you for sharing this gift with us!
Lynn
I am looking forward to reading it too:-)
Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving such sweet comments:-) Hope to see you again soon:-)
You simply put have one of the best blogs i have read. Thank you for following GarysWorld. Please stay in touch.
Gary@GarysWorld
Beautiful, sooo touching…. I tell u again,..my life is richer for having met you.
Saw the comments u left on my blog..thank you.
Great work, very nice blog layout!
That is a beautiful poem. Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving a comment.
What a lovely story as poetry you created.
hi Muse..
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I.m popping over to have a read now
I will take a look or should I say a “read”!
-sandy toes
I’m going to read it now….thanks for inviting me.
Beautiful poem of hope, thanks for inviting me in…I will be back.
How exciting to make a new blogger friend…and one with such talent! Looking forward to visiting you often!
Bo
I am still wiping the tears. I wrote a comment after I read your poem. One of the best things I have ever read. Thank you for visiting my blog. I am now a regular of this blog. Incredible writing.
Read your poem and commented on that blog! Loved it. Thank you for your comment!! You have a wonderful gift with words. I taught English for 33 years and can appreciate good writing, but cannot do it myself!!
Amy said: “Ms. Muse, what hauntingly beautiful prose…my heart was in my chest and so glad that there was a happy ending. We are so grateful for everything that we have…the Lord continues to be extraordinarily gracious…great blessings to you and your household as well…thank you so much for sharing…much love…”
I am glad you came by too..so I could find you and your wonderful messages really lovely.. will save you to my favs..
hugs Patty
Thank you so much for inviting me over to read your beautiful poem. I love it. You truly have a wonderful gift with words.
I look forward to reading more.
Lindsay
What an evocative poem! It embodies the emotions of the season…the desire to help those in need, the wonder of Christmas, seen only through a child's eyes & pure unadulterated love. It was beautiful & I so enjoyed it!
Chills all over me reading this beautiful story – Thank you for sharing your gift with us
Hugs Silvia
Hello, I was so touched by this poem! It’s beautiful and so heartfelt. You are truly talented. I’m so happy you visited my new blog. Thank you. I will be back to visit here. Yours is one of the most ceative I’ve seen. Come visit mine anytime as well. You’re always welcome. ~Melissa
Hey Sooz from Twitter says:
That was beautiful. I’ve got tears, now!
Absolutely gorgeous prose that flows from your pen milady
Thank you for sharing them. You are quite inspiring and I’m very VERY happy we found each other on twitter.
skyM
Dearest Muse,
I hope you won’t mind if I follow your blog. Also, I would love to place your poem on my blog. It’s beautiful and should be shared with the world. I will understand though if you do not want to do that. I hope you have a lovely day.
Hello Muse, You are too smart for me…LOL This is beautiful! I am so glad you stopped by my blog, it’s so nice to meet you! Please come back anytime! Oh, I tried to play the game above…just not that smart…LOL I really did enjoy reading all the comments…what fun! Blessings, nancy
You ask me if I minded if you became a follower to my blog.I don’t mind at all.I am adding you to my google reader and will put you on my blog list also.
Have a great evening.
Oh my goodness! What a touching of “The Unexpected Gift”!! Yes! You’re right! The only we cherised they was our Family! Nothing to be so greatful when a whole family gathering together to celebrate with the special holiday
Hugs,
Kelly
What an amazing talent and sense of creativity you have! I’ve been ‘wandering’ around your blog here, and am dazzled by your words, your talent!
Wha!?! I was just getting into it! Please let me know if/when it gets published. I’d love to read the rest.
Thanks for sharing your post with Best Posts of the Year!