Waltzing on the Water


She waltzed upon the water…
She waltzed upon the land.
She waltzed in the heavens…
She waltzed with God and Man.

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The Muse

Comments (26) »

  • Miriam says:

    This is beautiful Muse! I love all your writings and it’s always such a pleasure to come to your blog.

    Miriam

  • Judi "Jlo" Moran says:

    Beautiful, my friend…I pray it describes my journey as well as yours.
    I long to reach out and set others free, with God’s message of hope and love and power.
    I truly dance through my days now as the soul in this poem.
    I love the line: “I waltz with God and Man.”
    Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
    Love,
    Your friend,
    Jlo

  • White Iris Designs says:

    Always creating, always praying, always knowing what to say & when to say it, always seeing the good in everyone & everything, always a friend….yes that is you!
    What a beautiful lyric…I can just see you dancing & singing… floating from one to another sharing your joy.
    xo

  • KellyKim says:

    This is a great poem to expressed how muse been went through of her life!! My muse are getting stonger than she ever be :)

    p/s: I am sorry that my poor english… if something wrong of my words please forgive me.

    Hugs,
    Kelly

  • KellyKim says:

    sorry, muse… is stronger not stonger.

  • papercages says:

    It is always so difficult for me to find words to express how your writing effects me. It is breathtakingly beautiful and powerful. ~ tricia

  • The Muse says:

    Miriam, it has been a joy to find you and your lovely blog…I am so happy that reading here brings you happiness :) May your work be bright and joyful!

    Jlo, agreed, this prose can describe many of us…that in itself is remarkable and wonderful! Thank you for your kind and uplifting words.

    Kelly, the light of sweetness…your English is just fine my little one :) just fine! Hurrah that your inner muse is getting STRONGER…I see you growing before my eyes and I think it is Marvelous~! :)

    Tam, :) :) you are always so good to me…even when my waltzes look more like the funky chicken LOL xoxo! LOL So happy that friendship can overlook and overcome the rusty dance steps of Old Muses! LOL xoxo

    Greetings Tricia (papercages), you continue to bring laughter to my heart…and a smile to my soul. I am pleased that you are effected (in a good way (lol)) by my writing. And thank you sincerely for the compliments!

  • Heather says:

    You write such beautiful poems.

    Got to tell you I walked the other day and the wind was blowing – thought of the Autumn Wind King.

  • David says:

    I see I will have to come by here on a regular basis. I love the imagery, both graphic and word.

  • The Muse says:

    Heather, what a wistful smile you have brought to this Muse’s face…! Oh, how gently the breeze does blow.

    David, I thank you for the kindness of your spirit and the sincerity of your compliment. Your blog of family shows a such a solid foundation of your leadership and guidance.

  • Liz says:

    I love this! Again you paint me picture. In every sentence you make the poem come a live.

  • raquel roysdon says:

    How many poetry books have you written, can I get them at Amazon? Come on, when?
    Love you my friend.

  • Scott says:

    Hey your blog is nicely written…

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  • The Muse says:

    Dear Liz, so glad your mom is doing better! I hope your holidays are memorable with her this year! :) Thank you for seeing the imagery of the work and enjoying the painted stories of my soul.

    Ah Ms Raquel…I shall do all I can to assure that next Christmas the prose is alive in both book and audio…your words most kind are forever treasured.

    Hello Scott, welcome to the Diva’s Hammer, please visit us when you can :)

  • LisaLisa says:

    Wow your very words just takes my breath away…..you are truly blessed with such a wonderful gift. May God Bless You Always!!
    xoxoxoxo

  • Lady Lynn's Boutique says:

    You are the one person in my life that has inspired me the most, to open my heart to the world around me. You lead each of us to share who we are and not fear loving one another.
    I for one, “feel” the special bond you have created between us and have grown as a Christian for having known you! You are the loveliest of souls!!!

  • The Cookie Girl says:

    It has been so long since I have visited with you and have missed it very much. Your words are so uplifting to me. Thank you Muse for loving, and praying and caring for me.
    xoxo

  • Charli and me says:

    A very thought provoking and beautiful poem. I am glad I stopped by.

  • Tracy says:

    This is beautiful!

  • MARGARITA BLOOM says:

    Hiya Muse!! You know I love all of our proses! :) and this is just lovely! I hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving…whew, I still feel stuffed from all the turkey! lol…That crab dipped turned out ehhh….not my favorite thing to eat. I think I’ll stick to Maryland Crab Cakes thank you very much.

    Heehee, I thought those turkey or should I say…firkee! facts would be interesting and get a little LOL from everybody. Talk to you later!

  • Jewelgirl says:

    Nice to meet you Muse, your work is
    delightful and feeds my inner soul!
    I love this picture!!!! Stunning!

  • ~~ATTIC CLUTTER~~ says:

    Wonderful Muse(:)
    hugs,Patty

  • david mcmahon says:

    What beautiful writing. Thanks for the visit and the comment.

    Just off to check out your recommendation now ….

  • Melissa Miller says:

    ~Beautifully written.

  • Gran says:

    I find your words so comforting, Muse. I think of a person lighter than air. I often imagine that I can fly, at night when everyone else is asleep.

  • skyM says:

    I am just in awe with your site! I come in here, listen to your songs play, read your inspirationals and get absolutely lost in peace.

    I couldn’t have needed you more

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